Thriller PItch

Media Thriller Opening Pitch

Overall we received a lot of positive feed back from what we have done so far. The people we showed our pitches too were drawn to the detective idea and the crime scene however they also liked the idea of using the diner for our location because it wasn't previously mentioned. The western idea wasn't a particularly serious idea however it would have been enjoyable to do if we had the right resources, props etc. However it would have been very difficult to look authentic, so we have decided to expand on the other two ideas. We wanted to use a dual narrative, and the two pitches that were received well can be combined into a complete idea.