Preliminary Task: Evaluation
After reviewing the Preliminary Task I noticed some aspects which were successful and others which could be improved.
Positive aspects:
Positive aspects:
- Continuity:costumes and positions were continuous.
- Effects: The effects used on the video helped to give it a mysterious and Noir feel.
- Freeze frames: Gave a retro feel and an originality style and flare to the piece.
- Fades: The use of fades in the beginning section helped to give the impression of time passing and worked well with the beat of the soundtrack.
- Editing: Generally the editing was very smooth and the piece flowed well without any obvious jumps in time and action.
Criticisms:
- Continuity: There's a door which is not closed by any of the characters but is shut later on in the scene.
- Editing: There is one shot which goes on for too long, before the code to the door is punched in. The following shot's delayed start also should have been trimmed, to make the the action flow more fluently.
- Audio: The fade when the volume of the music decreases is too harsh and disrupts the atmosphere in that section of the video.
The issues raised have been acknowledged and noted down as areas to improve on in our next production. We will also try to ensure any of these mistakes do not happen again and our thriller is of a higher standard than our preliminary task.